Big Boss in office, Employee in my house

Hi Expert Answers*

I have _____ a good relationship with my girlfriend for one year, I'm 33 years old and she's 24 years old. We have a tiny dog and small an apartment in downtown. Currently, I have an important position in my company, I'm _____ big boss. However, since two month ago, I have been a big problem, because my girlfriend when I arrive an apartment, she every time says _____ me* ” please I need to go shopping, I need to go visit a my mother, I need to clean a house, I need..................... “ all ___ time she is demanding __ me, she is my big boss. I'm tired the this situation................ I'm very afraid. What can you to???

 –---- Big Boss in office, Employee in my house

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